This unit is for you if your Duolingo English Test (DET) Writing subscore is below 100, or if you have never typed an answer to a DET writing question against the clock. At DET 60–95 (CEFR B1), a reader can usually follow your ideas, but your photo descriptions name things instead of describing them, your longer answers stop after two or three thin ideas, and small errors (a missing a or the, a wrong verb form, an Indian English phrase) appear in almost every sentence. You do not need rare words to move up. You need complete, correct sentences, a fixed plan for each of the four writing tasks, a timing routine that leaves you time to check, and control of the small group of mistakes that Indian candidates make again and again.
Why it matters: Writing is one of the four DET subscores, each reported from 10 to 160 in steps of 5, and your overall score is the average of the four, rounded up to the next 5. Writing also feeds two combined subscores that some universities look at: Literacy (Reading and Writing) and Production (Speaking and Writing). Many universities in the USA, Canada, the UK and Europe ask for an overall score of about 105–120, and some set a minimum subscore as well; requirements vary by university and by course, so always check the official admissions page. One writing task, the Writing Sample, is also sent to the universities you share your results with, so an admissions officer may read your exact words. Every score in this book is an FLC estimate, not a promise, but the pattern is clear: candidates who master the sentence rules and the four plans in this unit rarely stay below 100 for long. Level 2 builds directly on what you learn here.
How the Writing tasks work
| Task | Time | What you do |
|---|---|---|
| Write About the Photo | 3 photos · 1 minute each · no planning time | Type a description of a photo. The photo stays on screen while you write. |
| Interactive Writing | 30 seconds to plan · Part 1: 5 minutes · Part 2: 3 minutes | Answer a question. Then answer a follow-up question on the same topic, with an idea you have not used yet. Both parts are scored together. |
| Writing Sample | 30 seconds to plan · 5 minutes | Write about your own experience or give your opinion. It is sent to the universities that receive your results. |
| Summarize the Conversation | 75 seconds · at the end of each Interactive Listening set | Write a short summary of the conversation you have just taken part in. It counts towards both Writing and Listening. |
The DET is taken at home on a computer and lasts about an hour. The writing questions do not come together in one block: they appear at different points in the test, between reading, listening and speaking questions, so you must switch into the right plan in a second. You type every answer, a timer runs on screen, and there is no spell checker and no grammar checker. Paper and pens are not allowed in the test room, so every plan in this unit is a plan you can hold in your head. Much of the DET is adaptive (questions get harder or easier with your answers), but the three writing questions (Write About the Photo, Interactive Writing and the Writing Sample) are not.
Rule
The DET accepts both British and North American spelling: colour or color, organise or organize, practise or practice as a verb. This book uses British spelling, as most FLC students learnt it at school. Whichever you choose, keep to one in each answer, and remember that a word spelt wrongly in either system is still a mistake.
How your writing is scored
Every writing response is judged on the same four criteria: content, discourse coherence, grammar and lexis (vocabulary). The DET gives you one Writing subscore, not separate task scores, and it does not publish how much each task or criterion counts. The descriptions below are FLC’s plain-English summary of what the criteria mean, with the difference between typical Level 1 writing and writing that reaches 100.
| Criterion | What it means | Typical DET 60–95 | What 100 and above adds |
|---|---|---|---|
| Content | You answer the exact question, fully, with relevant detail. | Names objects in the photo; misses one part of a question; ideas stated but not explained | Actions and details in the photo; every part of the question answered; a reason and an example for each idea |
| Discourse coherence | Your ideas come in a clear order and are linked, so the reader never gets lost. | Ideas in the order they came to mind; and, so and also used again and again | A plan the reader can see: answer, point, example, close; connectors such as because, for example, however |
| Grammar | Your sentences are correct and you can use more than one kind. | Fragments, missing is or are, wrong tenses, missing articles | Most simple sentences correct; some because, when and if sentences |
| Lexis | You choose words that are precise, natural and correctly spelt. | good, nice, many, very again and again; Indian English phrases; spelling slips | A few precise topic words; no text speak; careful spelling |
The table below is your timing at a glance. The DET sets no word limits for its writing tasks; the word targets are FLC’s Level 1 targets, chosen so that you can finish, develop your ideas and still check.
| Task | FLC Level 1 target | Time plan |
|---|---|---|
| Write About the Photo | 3 sentences · 30–45 words | 5 seconds to look · 45 seconds to write · 10 seconds to check |
| Interactive Writing Part 1 | 80–110 words | 30 seconds to plan · 4 minutes to write · 1 minute to check |
| Interactive Writing Part 2 | 50–70 words | 20 seconds to choose a new idea · 2 minutes 10 seconds to write · 30 seconds to check |
| Writing Sample | 90–120 words | 30 seconds to plan · 4 minutes to write · 1 minute to check |
| Summarize the Conversation | 2–3 sentences · 35–55 words | 60 seconds to write · 15 seconds to check |
FLC Tip
At this level the quickest gains come from three things: full sentences with a correct verb (no lists of nouns), answering every part of the question, and keeping the last minute for checking. All three are pure technique. You can fix them in two weeks, long before your vocabulary grows. Practise on a computer keyboard, not a phone: if you type fewer than 25 words a minute, slow typing alone can hold your Writing subscore down.
Lesson 1 · Sentence building: the complete sentence
Every DET writing task is built from sentences, and every English sentence needs a subject and a full verb. Learn the basic chain, then learn to add detail to it.
| Subject | Verb | Object or description | Detail: place · time · reason |
|---|---|---|---|
| Two students | are studying | for an exam | in a library |
| A man | is selling | fresh fruit | at an outdoor market |
| I | want to learn | public speaking | because I feel nervous in class |
| My laptop | stopped working | – | two days before my exams |
- Actions happening now use is / are + -ing. This is the main tense for photos: A woman is holding an umbrella. Never drop the is or are.
- Things that are there use there is / there are. There is a cup on the table. · There are two people at the bus stop. Use only one verb after it: There are many people waiting, not There are many people are waiting.
- Describing words go before the noun: a red umbrella, a wooden table, tall bookshelves.
- Place words show position: on the left, on the right, in the middle, in front of, behind, next to, in the background.
Worked example: from a core sentence to a full sentence
| Step | Sentence |
|---|---|
| Core | A man is selling fruit. |
| + describing words | A smiling man is selling fresh fruit. |
| + place | A smiling man is selling fresh fruit at an outdoor market. |
| + who or what else | A smiling man in a green shirt is selling fresh fruit to a customer at an outdoor market. |
Kunal, a Level 1 student from Bharuch, used to write Man selling fruits. That is a list, not a sentence: there is no article, no is, and fruits is unusual here (fruit is normally uncountable). The full version above uses the same idea but shows the reader the grammar and vocabulary the DET is looking for.
Rule
No verb, no sentence. Two students sitting at a table. → Two students are sitting at a table.
Singular nouns need a, an or the. There is laptop on table. → There is a laptop on the table.
Plural subject, plural verb. The students is talking. → The students are talking.
Exercise 1 Choose the correct sentence
Choose the sentence that is complete and correct.
1 Which sentence is complete and correct?
- Two students sitting at a table.
- Two students are sitting at a table.
- Two students is sitting at a table.
- Two students are sit at a table.
2 Which sentence is correct?
- There are many people walking in the street.
- There are many people are walking in the street.
- Many people there are walking in the street.
- There is many people walking in the street.
3 Which sentence is correct?
- A woman is holding an umbrella red.
- A woman red umbrella is holding.
- A woman is holding a red umbrella.
- A woman is holding red umbrella.
4 Which sentence is correct and natural?
- The bookshelves are behind of the students.
- Behind the students there is tall bookshelves.
- The bookshelves are back side of the students.
- Tall bookshelves stand behind the students.
5 Which sentence joins the reason correctly?
- The man is wearing a coat because it is raining.
- The man is wearing a coat, because of it is raining.
- Because it is raining. The man is wearing a coat.
- The man is wearing a coat, it is raining so.
Exercise 2 Grow the sentence
Add the details in brackets to make one longer, correct sentence. You may change the order of the details if it sounds more natural.
- A boy is reading. (a comic book · on a sofa · in a living room)
- A woman is cooking. (smiling · rice · in a small kitchen)
- Two men are carrying a box. (heavy · up the stairs · together)
- A girl is waiting. (for a train · with a backpack · on a busy platform)
- Some people are sitting. (on the grass · under a big tree · having a picnic)
- A man is fixing a bicycle. (outside his shop · with a small tool · for a customer)
Lesson 2 · Write About the Photo
You see a photo and have one minute to describe it in writing. There is no planning time, and you do this three times, with three different photos. The DET’s own advice is to describe in detail rather than just naming things, to avoid long introductions and to write full, correct sentences. FLC turns that advice into a plan you can use in every photo:
| Sentence | What it does | Example |
|---|---|---|
| 1 · The big picture | Who is there, what they are doing, where. | Two students are studying at a table in a library. |
| 2 · The main action in detail | Each person or the most important thing, with an -ing verb. | The young man is typing on a laptop, and the woman is writing in a notebook. |
| 3 · Details and position | Objects, clothes, colours, what is behind or next to them. | Tall bookshelves stand behind them. |
| 4 · Extra, only if time | The background, the weather, or one sensible guess. | They might be preparing for an exam. |
FLC’s Level 1 target is three good sentences, about 30–45 words. If you type slowly, three correct sentences beat five broken ones. Use the time like this: 5 seconds to look at the whole photo, about 45 seconds to write, and the last 10 seconds to check the end of each sentence (a full stop, a capital letter at the start, is or are before each -ing verb).
In the real test you see a photograph. The photos in this book are simple drawings of real-life scenes, so that you can practise the same skills.
Key Language
Position: on the left · on the right · in the middle · in the foreground · in the background · behind · in front of · next to · between
Action now: is holding · is pointing at · is handing … to … · are waiting for · are talking to each other
A careful guess: They might be… · It looks like… · She seems to be… · It is probably…
Exam Trap
Do not start every sentence with In this picture I can see…. It wastes words and time, and it turns your answer into a list. Start with the people and the action: A man is selling fruit…. Do not invent a story either: if you write about the woman’s family dinner or the man’s money problems, you are describing things that are not in the photo. One short guess at the end (They might be…) is enough.
Worked example
Write About the Photo · 1 minute
Meera, a Level 1 student from Vadodara, looks for five seconds and sees: two students · library · laptop · notebook · books behind. She starts with the big picture, gives each student an -ing verb, and adds one detail about the background. She stops typing with ten seconds left and checks that every sentence has a verb.
The same description at four levels
Here is a description of the library photo written at each of the four FLC levels. The photo is the same; what changes is how much detail there is, how well the sentences are controlled and how precise the words are. Read them in order, then decide which one is closest to the way you write now.
In this picture I can see two student. They are study in library. There is laptop, books and cup on table. Behind them many books are there.
(27 words)
Why this description is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 60–95)
- Content: the main things are named, but nobody does anything specific: we do not learn that one student is typing and the other is writing.
- Grammar: “two student”, “are study”, “There is laptop… on table” (missing articles), “many books are there” (Indian English word order).
- Lexis and coherence: very basic words, and the opening “In this picture I can see” uses a quarter of the answer on nothing.
To reach the next level
- Start with the people and the action, not “In this picture”.
- Give each person an is + -ing verb.
- Put a or the before every singular noun.
Two students are studying at a wooden table in a library. The young man on the left is typing on a laptop, and the young woman next to him is writing in a notebook. Tall bookshelves stand behind them.
(39 words)
Why this description is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 100–115)
- Content: the FLC plan in action: big picture, each person’s action, one background detail.
- Grammar: every sentence is complete and correct; one sentence joins two actions with and.
- Lexis: simple but exact words: “wooden table”, “typing on a laptop”, “tall bookshelves”. This is the target for the end of Level 1.
To reach the next level
- Add one sensible guess about the situation: they seem to be preparing for an exam.
- Try while to join two actions: …is typing, while the woman beside him…
Two university students are working quietly at a table in a library. The young man is typing on his laptop, while the woman beside him is taking notes in a notebook. A pile of books and a cup of coffee suggest that they are preparing for an exam.
(48 words)
Why this description is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 120–130)
- A guess that is supported by what we can see: the books and the cup “suggest” exam preparation.
- Varied sentence types: while joins two actions; the last sentence has an object clause (suggest that…).
- More precise verbs: “working quietly”, “taking notes”.
Two students share a wooden table in a bright, quiet library, surrounded by tall shelves of books. The young man is focused on his laptop, while his classmate takes careful notes beside a stack of textbooks. With a cup of coffee within reach, they look ready for a long revision session.
(51 words)
Why this description is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 135–160)
- Every sentence carries extra detail without becoming long: “surrounded by tall shelves of books”, “within reach”.
- Natural, precise phrases: “is focused on”, “takes careful notes”, “a long revision session”.
- It reads as one smooth picture rather than a list. Do not try to type this much in one minute at Level 1; it is here so you can see where the road leads.
Exercise 3 Judge the photo sentences
Look at the photo, then answer the questions.
1 Which is the best first sentence?
- In this picture I can see a market.
- A man is selling fruit to a woman at an outdoor market stall.
- This is a very beautiful and colourful photograph which is showing many things.
- Fruit is healthy, so people should eat it every day.
2 A student wrote: “Fruits. Man. Woman. Bag. Basket.” What is the main problem?
- It is in the wrong tense.
- It uses British spelling.
- It only names things: there are no sentences, actions or details.
- It is too long for one minute.
3 Which sentence adds an accurate detail?
- The man is wearing a green shirt and a white apron, and he is handing the woman a paper bag.
- The man is angry because the woman has not paid.
- The woman is buying vegetables for her family’s dinner tonight.
- There are apples, mangoes and grapes on the stall.
4 You have ten seconds left. Which is the best final sentence?
- That is all I can see in this picture.
- In conclusion, markets are important for every city.
- I like going to the market with my mother in my village.
- The stall has a red and white striped roof, and it looks like a sunny day.
Exercise 4 From notes to sentences
Each set of notes is what a student saw in a photo in the first five seconds. Turn each set into three or four full sentences, following the FLC plan: big picture, main action, details.
- Airport · family of three · father checking his phone · girl sitting on a suitcase · big windows · plane outside
- Classroom · teacher pointing at a whiteboard · students raising their hands · map on the wall
Exercise 5 Write about the photo
Set a timer for one minute and type your description on a computer with spell check switched off. Aim for three sentences. Then compare with the model in the key.
Lesson 3 · Interactive Writing, Part 1: answer every part
Interactive Writing starts with a question about your life, your choices or your opinion. You have 30 seconds to read and plan, then 5 minutes to write. Many questions have two or three parts, for example:
- Describe a skill you would like to learn. → which skill
- Why do you want to learn it? → why
- How will you learn it? → how
Content is judged on whether you answer the exact question, every part of it. A beautiful answer to two parts out of three cannot score as well as a simple answer to all three. In the 30 seconds, count the parts of the question on your fingers, and choose one idea for each part. You cannot make notes on paper, so keep the plan to a few words in your head: public speaking · nervous in class · join a club.
The Part 1 plan
| Move | What you write | Words |
|---|---|---|
| 1 · Answer | One sentence that answers the first part of the question directly. | 10–15 |
| 2 · Detail or example | Two sentences that make the answer real: when, where, what happened. | 20–30 |
| 3 · Second part of the question | Two or three sentences: a reason with because, then a detail. | 25–35 |
| 4 · Third part, or a close | Two sentences on the last part of the question, or one sentence that sums up. | 20–30 |
FLC’s Level 1 target is 80–110 words. Time plan: use the 30 seconds to count the parts and choose your ideas; write for 4 minutes; keep the last minute to check that every part is answered and every sentence has a verb. Leave a line between your short paragraphs so the reader can see your plan.
Exam Trap
Do not empty every idea you have into Part 1. Part 2 is a new question on the same topic, and it asks for something you have not already written about. Answer the Part 1 question well with two or three developed points, and keep the rest of your energy for Part 2.
Worked example
Interactive Writing · Part 1 · 5 minutes
Describe a skill you would like to learn in the future. Why do you want to learn it, and how will you learn it?
Arjun, a Level 1 student from Anand, counts three parts (which skill, why, how) and holds three ideas in his head: public speaking · presentations abroad and job interviews · a club and recording myself.
The same answer at four levels
I want to learn public speaking. Because in my college I am very nervous when I speak in front of class. My hands are shaking and I forget everything. Public speaking is very important skill for job also. So I want to learn it. I think it is very useful for my future and I will do hard work for it.
(61 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 60–95)
- Content: the skill and a reason are there, but the third part of the question (how will you learn it?) is never answered. “I will do hard work for it” is not a method.
- Grammar: a fragment (“Because in my college…”), “very important skill” (no a), “for job also”.
- Coherence and lexis: “very” four times, “important” and “useful” say the same thing, and the ideas repeat instead of moving forward.
To reach the next level
- Answer all three parts, one short paragraph each.
- Replace general words with a real detail: Last month I gave a presentation and forgot half of it.
- Join because to the sentence before it.
I would like to learn public speaking. At the moment, I feel very nervous when I have to speak in front of my class. Last month I gave a presentation in college, and I forgot half of what I wanted to say.
I want to learn this skill because it will help me in my studies abroad and in my future job. Students often give presentations at university, and many job interviews test how well you speak.
To learn it, I plan to join a public speaking club. I will also practise at home by recording short talks on my phone and watching them.
(104 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 100–115)
- Content: all three parts answered, one paragraph each, each with a real detail (the presentation last month, interviews, the club and the phone recordings).
- Coherence: the reader can see the plan; “At the moment”, “because”, “To learn it” and “also” guide the reader.
- Grammar and lexis: accurate sentences with when, because and what I wanted to say. This is the target for the end of Level 1.
To reach the next level
- Explain why a little further: what exactly would change if you could speak confidently?
- Use a few more precise words: confident, structure a talk, feedback.
One skill I would really like to develop is public speaking. Although I know my subjects well, I become nervous whenever I have to present in front of a group. During a college presentation last month, my mind went blank and I skipped half of my points.
This skill matters to me because I am planning to study abroad, where presentations and class discussions are a regular part of assessment. Being able to speak confidently would also help me in job interviews later.
My plan is to join a public speaking club, where members give short speeches and receive feedback. In addition, I will record myself on my phone so that I can notice and correct my own habits.
(119 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 120–130)
- The reason is explained more fully: presentations are “a regular part of assessment” abroad.
- Controlled complex sentences: Although…, whenever…, two where clauses, so that….
- Natural phrases: “my mind went blank”, “receive feedback”, “notice and correct my own habits”.
The skill I most want to master is public speaking. On paper I am a strong student, but put me in front of an audience and my confidence disappears; in a seminar last month, I lost my train of thought halfway through and rushed to the end.
Overcoming this matters because the universities I am applying to assess students through presentations and class debates, not just written exams. Speaking persuasively is also what separates candidates in interviews, so the benefits would extend well beyond my degree.
I intend to join a public speaking club, since regular practice in a supportive setting seems to be the fastest way to build confidence. Alongside that, I will film short talks at home and review them critically, focusing on my pace and eye contact.
(130 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 135–160)
- Every part of the question is answered with precise, well-chosen detail (“pace and eye contact”, “presentations and class debates”).
- Wide, natural range: “lost my train of thought”, “separates candidates”, “extend well beyond my degree”, a semicolon used correctly.
- Each paragraph explains why, not just what. Do not copy this length at Level 1; it is here so you can see where the road leads.
FLC Tip
The jump from the first answer to the second comes almost entirely from three habits: one paragraph for each part of the question, one real detail in each paragraph and no fragments starting with Because. None of them needs new grammar.
Exercise 6 Does it answer the question?
Choose the best first sentence for each Interactive Writing question.
1 What is your favourite way to spend a weekend, and why?
- The weekend is very important in everyone’s life.
- My favourite way to spend a weekend is going on a long bike ride with my friends, because it helps me relax after a busy week.
- There are many ways to spend a weekend, and every person is different.
- In today’s modern era, people are very busy.
2 Would you rather live in a big city or a small town? Explain your choice.
- Every coin has two sides, and cities and towns both have good and bad points.
- Big cities are famous all over the world.
- Many people move to cities to find jobs.
- I would rather live in a small town, mainly because life there is quieter and cheaper.
3 Describe a book, film or series that taught you something. What did you learn?
- I watch many films on my phone.
- Films are a good source of entertainment and knowledge.
- A film that taught me something important is Hidden Figures, which showed me how talent and courage can break down barriers.
- Reading books is a good habit for students.
4 Should students wear uniforms at school? Why or why not?
- Yes, I think students should wear uniforms, because uniforms help every student feel equal.
- Uniforms are clothes that students wear.
- In my school we had uniform.
- This is a very interesting question.
Exercise 7 Put the answer in order
These six sentences answer the question Describe a person you admire. Why do you admire this person? Put them in the best order. Write the letters.
- A · For example, when our neighbour lost his job last year, she helped him write his CV and prepare for interviews.
- B · The person I admire most is my aunt, who works as a nurse in a busy city hospital.
- C · That is why I hope to be as kind and hard-working as she is.
- D · I admire her first because she is always ready to help other people, even when she is tired.
- E · I also admire her because she went back to college at the age of forty and finished a nursing degree.
- F · This shows me that it is never too late to learn something new.
Your Part 1 task for this lesson
Interactive Writing · Part 1 · 5 minutes
Describe a place in your town or city that you enjoy visiting. What do you do there, and why do you like it?
Exercise 8 Write Part 1
Allow 30 seconds to count the parts of the question and choose an idea for each, then 5 minutes to write: 4 to write and 1 to check. Aim for 80–110 words. Then compare with the model in the key. Keep your answer: Exercise 10 is its Part 2.
Lesson 4 · Interactive Writing, Part 2: a new idea
As soon as Part 1 ends, a follow-up question appears on the same topic. You have 3 minutes. The question asks you to write about an idea you did not cover in Part 1, often by moving from your own life to a more general question, or from one side of the topic to another. Part 1 and Part 2 are scored together, so Part 2 is where you show that you can think about the topic from a new angle.
| Move | What you write | Words |
|---|---|---|
| 1 · Answer | One sentence that answers the new question directly. No “As I said before”. | 10–15 |
| 2 · Reason | One or two sentences: why you think so. | 15–25 |
| 3 · Example | One or two sentences: a real case that shows your reason. | 15–25 |
| 4 · Close | One short sentence, only if you have time. | 5–10 |
FLC’s Level 1 target is 50–70 words. Time plan: 20 seconds to read the question and choose one new reason and one example; about 2 minutes 10 seconds to write; 30 seconds to check.
Exam Trap
Copying or repeating your Part 1 sentences adds nothing new, and the question has asked for something new. If Part 1 was about your skill, Part 2 might ask about skills for everyone; if Part 1 was about a place you like, Part 2 might ask what your town should change. Read the Part 2 question as a brand-new question that happens to share a topic.
Worked example
Interactive Writing · Part 2 · 3 minutes
Some people think schools should teach practical skills, such as cooking or managing money, as part of the normal timetable. Do you agree? Why or why not?
Arjun wrote about public speaking in Part 1. Now the question is about practical skills for all school students. He chooses a new idea: money management · moving abroad · rent and budget.
The same answer at four levels
Yes I agree. Practical skill is very important. Like I said before public speaking is very important. Cooking is also important skill. So school must teach it.
(27 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 60–95)
- Content: it agrees, but gives no reason and no example, and it goes back to the Part 1 idea (public speaking).
- Grammar and lexis: “Practical skill is” (should be plural), “important skill” (no an), “important” four times.
To reach the next level
- Choose one skill from the question and give one reason with because.
- Add one real example from your own life.
I agree that schools should teach practical skills, especially how to manage money. Many young people leave school without knowing how to make a budget. For example, when I move to Canada next year, I will have to pay rent and buy food by myself, and nobody at school taught me how to plan this. Lessons like these would prepare students for real life.
(64 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 100–115)
- Content: a clear answer, a reason, a personal example and a close, all on a new idea (money, not public speaking).
- Grammar: correct sentences with when, how to and a future plan. This is the target for the end of Level 1.
To reach the next level
- Explain the result: what goes wrong when students do not learn this?
I strongly agree, and I think managing money should come first. Most students finish school knowing algebra but not how to plan a monthly budget, so many make costly mistakes later. When I move to Canada next year, I will be responsible for rent, groceries and bills for the first time, and I am learning all of this from online videos rather than from a teacher. A short course at school would have made this much easier.
(77 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 120–130)
- The reason has a result (“so many make costly mistakes later”), and the contrast “algebra but not how to plan a monthly budget” makes the point sharp.
- A more advanced structure used correctly: “would have made this much easier”.
I agree, and of the skills mentioned, financial literacy seems the most urgent. Schools spend years on abstract maths yet rarely show students how interest, rent or a simple budget work, which leaves many young adults learning through expensive mistakes. I am a case in point: with my move to Canada approaching, I am teaching myself to manage rent and bills from online videos. A single term of practical lessons could spare students that stress.
(75 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 135–160)
- Precise, academic vocabulary used naturally: “financial literacy”, “abstract maths”, “a case in point”, “spare students that stress”.
- Tight logic in very few words: claim, reason, consequence, personal evidence, recommendation.
Exercise 9 A new idea for Part 2
In Part 1, Kavya described her favourite festival, Navratri: the dancing, the music and the food. The Part 2 question is: Do you think traditional festivals are becoming less important for young people? Why or why not?
1 Which is the best first sentence for Part 2?
- As I said before, Navratri is my favourite festival and we dance garba.
- I do not think traditional festivals are becoming less important, although young people celebrate them in new ways.
- Festivals are very important in India.
- Young people use mobile phones too much nowadays.
2 Which sentence gives the best support for her answer?
- For example, my cousins in Toronto now organise a garba night every year, and hundreds of students join, including many who are not Indian.
- For example, festivals are good.
- Because everybody likes festivals.
- For example, Navratri has nine nights, as I wrote in Part 1.
3 Another student wrote this for Part 2: “Navratri is my favourite festival. We dance every night and eat special food. I love the music and the colourful clothes.” What is the main problem?
- It is too formal.
- It uses the wrong tense.
- It repeats Part 1 and does not answer the new question.
- Nothing: it is a strong answer.
Your Part 2 task for this lesson
Interactive Writing · Part 2 · 3 minutes
Some people think towns and cities should spend more money on parks and public spaces than on new roads. What is your opinion?
Exercise 10 Write Part 2
This is the follow-up to your Exercise 8 answer. Allow 3 minutes: 20 seconds to choose one new reason and one example, then write, and keep 30 seconds to check. Aim for 50–70 words, and do not repeat what you wrote in Part 1. Then compare with the model in the key.
Lesson 5 · The Writing Sample: the answer universities read
Near the end of the test you get one more writing question: 30 seconds to read and plan, then 5 minutes to write. It is scored like the other writing tasks, and it is also sent to the universities that receive your results, so an admissions officer may read it next to your application. A school sees only the Writing Sample from the test you send it. The question asks you either to write about your own experience or to give your opinion:
| Question type | Example | FLC plan |
|---|---|---|
| Experience | Describe a time when you… · Tell us about a person who… | When and where · what happened · what you did · what you learnt |
| Opinion | Do you agree that…? · Is it better to… or…? | Your view · reason 1 with an example · reason 2 · close |
FLC’s Level 1 target is 90–120 words in two or three short paragraphs. Time plan: 30 seconds to choose your story or your view; 4 minutes to write; 1 minute to check spelling, capital letters and full stops. The DET’s own advice is the same: plan in the 30 seconds, and leave time at the end to check.
Rule
Write it as if a university professor will read it, because one may. That means full words (no u, pls, gr8), a capital I every time, capitals at the start of sentences and for names (Monday, Canada, Gujarat), and no letter formulas such as Respected Sir or Thanking you: it is an answer to a question, not a letter.
Exam Trap
Memorised answers are dangerous here. A prepared essay about “the importance of education in today’s modern era” will not fit the question you actually get, and content is judged on the exact question. Prepare stories instead: two or three real experiences (a problem you solved, a person who helped you, a goal you reached) that you can adapt to many questions.
Worked example
Writing Sample · 5 minutes
Describe a time when you had to solve a problem without help from other people. What did you do, and what did you learn?
Riya, a Level 1 student from Vadodara, chooses a real story in her 30 seconds: laptop broke before exams · family away · searched online, fixed it · learnt to stay calm and back up files.
The same answer at four levels
One time my laptop was not working before my exam. I was very tensed. My father was out of station and my brother was also not there. So I only solved it. I searched in youtube and I did restart and the problem is solved. I learnt that we should not be tensed and we should try ourself.
(58 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 60–95)
- Content: the story is there, but “what did you do” is one vague line (“I searched… and I did restart”).
- Lexis: Indian English that an international reader may not understand: “tensed”, “out of station”, “I only solved it” (meaning I solved it myself); “youtube” needs a capital.
- Grammar: the tense jumps from past to present (“the problem is solved”); “ourself” should be ourselves.
To reach the next level
- Tell the story in steps: First… Then… After an hour…
- Keep every verb in the past for a past story.
- Replace Indian English with international English: worried, travelling for work, by myself.
Last year, two days before my final exams, my laptop stopped working. All my notes were on it, so I was very worried. My father was travelling for work and my brother was at his hostel, so I had to solve the problem by myself.
First, I searched online for the error message on my screen. I found a video that explained how to start the laptop in safe mode. I followed the steps carefully, and after an hour the laptop worked again. Then I saved all my notes online.
I learnt that I can stay calm and solve problems on my own. I also learnt to back up my files.
(111 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 100–115)
- Content: both questions answered (what she did, what she learnt) in the order of the experience plan.
- Coherence: three paragraphs, and clear time words: “Last year”, “First”, “after an hour”, “Then”.
- Grammar and lexis: past tenses kept consistently; simple, international words. This is the target for the end of Level 1, and it would read well to an admissions officer.
To reach the next level
- Make the lesson more personal: how did this experience change what you do now?
- Vary the sentence openings: not every sentence needs to start with I.
Two days before my final exams last year, my laptop suddenly refused to start. Every one of my revision notes was stored on it, and with my father away on business and my brother living in a hostel, there was nobody at home to ask.
Instead of panicking, I wrote down the error message and searched for it online. A short tutorial explained how to start the computer in safe mode and remove a faulty update. It took me over an hour of careful work, but the laptop finally started, and the first thing I did was copy my notes to cloud storage.
The experience showed me that I can stay calm under pressure, and it taught me never to keep important work in only one place.
(127 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 120–130)
- More precise actions: “wrote down the error message”, “remove a faulty update”, “copy my notes to cloud storage”.
- Varied sentence openings and structures: “Instead of panicking”, “with my father away…”, “It took me over an hour…, but…”.
Forty-eight hours before my final exams, my laptop froze on a blue error screen and would not restart. Every revision note I had made that year was on it, and, with my father travelling and my brother away at his hostel, I was entirely on my own.
Rather than panic, I treated it as a puzzle. I noted the exact error code, found a technician’s tutorial online and worked through it step by step, booting in safe mode and rolling back the update that had caused the crash. When the familiar desktop finally appeared, my first move was to back everything up.
That evening taught me two lasting lessons: a calm, methodical approach solves more than worry ever does, and important work should never exist in only one place.
(129 words)
Why this answer is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 135–160)
- The story is vivid and controlled: “froze on a blue error screen”, “treated it as a puzzle”, “rolling back the update”.
- The lesson is expressed in a balanced, memorable sentence, introduced by a colon.
- Wide range with no errors. Do not copy this length at Level 1; it is here so you can see where the road leads.
Exercise 11 Writing for a university reader
Choose the best answer.
1 Question: Describe a time you helped someone. What happened? Which opening is best?
- Respected Sir/Madam, I am writing this sample for my admission.
- Last summer, I helped my younger brother prepare for his science exam when he was close to failing.
- Helping is a good quality which everybody should have in today’s modern era.
- hi, i helped my brother once
2 Which sentence is right for a university reader?
- I wanna study abroad cuz its gr8.
- I am very much passionate for studies since childhood itself.
- I have always enjoyed solving maths problems, and I want to study engineering.
- Myself Priya, from Anand, Gujarat.
3 Which plan suits the question Describe a time when you learnt something outside the classroom?
- Greeting, purpose, request, sign-off
- Your view, reason 1, reason 2, close
- Advantages, disadvantages, conclusion
- When and where, what happened, what you did, what you learnt
4 Which plan suits the question Do you agree that students should work part-time while studying?
- State your view, give one reason with an example, give a second reason, then close.
- Describe your best friend, then agree.
- Write about both sides equally and never give your own view.
- Write a memorised essay about the importance of education.
Exercise 12 Plan in 30 seconds
For each question, give yourself 30 seconds and decide: experience or opinion? Then note your plan in a few words, as you would hold it in your head on test day.
- Describe a time when you learnt something important outside the classroom.
- Some people think it is better to study in a group than alone. What do you think?
- Describe a goal you want to achieve in the next five years. How will you achieve it?
Your Writing Sample task for this lesson
Writing Sample · 5 minutes
Some people believe students should take a gap year (a year off) before they start university. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and examples.
Exercise 13 Write the Writing Sample
Allow 30 seconds to decide your view and your two reasons, 4 minutes to write and 1 minute to check. Aim for 90–120 words in two or three paragraphs. Either view can score well. Then compare with the model in the key.
Lesson 6 · Summarize the Conversation
Each Interactive Listening set is a conversation on campus, between two students or between a student and a professor. You take part in it: in Listen and Respond you choose what “you” say at each turn. At the end you have 75 seconds to type a short summary of the whole conversation. Your summary counts towards Writing (content, discourse coherence, grammar, lexis) and also towards Listening, because it shows whether you understood what happened. The DET’s own advice: write full sentences, not bullet points; explain the situation, the main ideas and what happened at the end. You may write as “I” (I asked my professor…) or about “two students”, and you may reuse words from the conversation.
| Sentence | What it says | Example |
|---|---|---|
| 1 · Situation | Who talked, and about what. | I talked to my classmate Leah about our marketing project. |
| 2 · Problem or main points | The difficulty, the question or the key information. | Our teammate Omar has not replied to our messages. |
| 3 · Outcome | What they decided or what happens next. | We agreed to meet in the library on Thursday. |
FLC’s Level 1 target is 2–3 sentences, about 35–55 words. There is no time to plan: start typing the situation sentence at once, and keep the last 15 seconds to check verbs and names. While you listen, hold three things in your head: who, what problem, what they decided.
Key Language
Situation: I talked to… about… · Two students discussed… · A student asked her professor about…
Problem: …was worried that… · …had a problem with… · …could not…
Outcome: They agreed to… · In the end, … · The professor suggested that… · …will… by Friday.
Reporting verbs (past): asked · explained · suggested · agreed · decided · told (someone) · said
Exam Trap
A summary is not your opinion and not a list. I think Omar is lazy. and project · Omar · library · Thursday both lose marks. Report what happened, in sentences. Also watch the names and numbers: if you write that the meeting is on Tuesday when it was Thursday, your summary is inaccurate, which costs marks.
In the test you hear the conversation. In this Writing unit you read it, so that you can focus on the writing side; the Listening units of this book train you to catch these details by ear.
Worked example
Conversation A · two classmates
Leah: Hi! Have you heard anything from Omar about our marketing project?
You: No, nothing. I sent him two messages this week, but he hasn’t replied.
Leah: Same here. The presentation is next Monday, and we still haven’t decided who’s doing which part.
You: I know. I’m getting a bit worried. Should we tell the professor?
Leah: Maybe not yet. Let’s give Omar one more day. If he doesn’t answer by tomorrow evening, we can email her together.
You: That sounds fair. In the meantime, why don’t we start without him? I could do the slides about the customer survey.
Leah: Great. Then I’ll work on the competitor research. Can we meet in the library on Thursday afternoon to put everything together?
You: Sure. Let’s say three o’clock.
The same summary at four levels
Leah and me talk about project. Omar is not giving reply. So we will tell to professor. We will meet on thursday.
(22 words)
Why this summary is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 60–95)
- Content: partly inaccurate. They decided not to tell the professor yet; they will email her only if Omar does not reply by tomorrow evening. The division of work is missing.
- Grammar: “Leah and me talk” (should be Leah and I talked), “about project”, “giving reply”, “tell to professor”, “thursday” without a capital.
To reach the next level
- Use the past tense for what was said: talked, decided, agreed.
- Check the outcome carefully: what exactly did they decide, and on what condition?
I talked to my classmate Leah about our marketing project. Our teammate Omar has not answered our messages, so we decided to email the professor if he does not reply by tomorrow. Meanwhile, I will make the survey slides, Leah will do the research, and we will meet in the library on Thursday.
(53 words)
Why this summary is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 100–115)
- Content: situation, problem and outcome, all accurate, including the condition (“if he does not reply by tomorrow”).
- Grammar and coherence: correct tenses; so, if and Meanwhile link the ideas; a list of three actions in one clear sentence. This is the target for the end of Level 1.
To reach the next level
- Add the key time detail (the presentation is next Monday) and use your own words where you can.
Two students discussed a group presentation that is due next Monday. Because their teammate Omar has not replied, they agreed to give him one more day before contacting the professor, and to divide the work between themselves in the meantime. They will meet in the library on Thursday at three to combine their parts.
(54 words)
Why this summary is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 120–130)
- It paraphrases instead of copying: “contacting the professor”, “divide the work”, “combine their parts”.
- Every key fact is there (deadline, condition, meeting time) in three well-built sentences.
Two classmates were concerned that a teammate had not responded about their marketing presentation, which is due on Monday. Rather than involve the professor straight away, they agreed to give him until the following evening, while splitting the survey slides and the competitor research between themselves. They arranged to meet in the library on Thursday afternoon to bring everything together.
(60 words)
Why this summary is at this level (FLC estimate: DET 135–160)
- Complete and precise, with natural reporting language: “were concerned that”, “Rather than involve”, “bring everything together”.
- Typing this much in 75 seconds needs fast, accurate typing. At Level 1, aim for the second summary.
Conversation B · a student and a professor
Read the conversation, then do Exercises 14 and 15.
Professor Hart: Come in. What can I do for you?
You: Hi, Professor Hart. I wanted to ask about the history test on Wednesday. My sister is getting married in Jaipur, and I’ll be away all week.
Professor Hart: I see. Congratulations to your sister! You can take the test when you come back.
You: Thank you. When could I take it?
Professor Hart: Next Monday at ten o’clock, in my office. But please send me an email about it by tomorrow, so that I have it in writing.
You: Of course. Will it be the same test?
Professor Hart: No, it will be a different test on the same chapters, and it will be a little shorter: thirty minutes instead of forty-five.
You: Okay. Thank you so much.
Exercise 14 Build the summary
Choose the best answer about a summary of Conversation B.
1 Which is the best first sentence?
- The professor is very nice and helpful.
- I visited Professor Hart to ask if I could take the history test on a different day.
- Weddings are an important part of Indian culture.
- In this conversation there are two people who are talking.
2 Which sentence is accurate?
- The student wanted to change the day because the test is too difficult.
- The professor refused to let the student take the test later.
- The student has to send the professor an email by tomorrow.
- The new test will be longer than the first one.
3 Which is the best final sentence?
- Then I said thank you and went home.
- Weddings are more important than tests.
- The professor told me many things about the test.
- The professor agreed, so I will take a shorter test next Monday at ten, and I must email her by tomorrow.
Exercise 15 Write the summary
Cover Conversation B. Set a timer for 75 seconds and type a summary of two or three sentences: situation, problem, outcome. Then uncover the conversation, check every name, day and number, and compare with the model in the key.
Lesson 7 · Correct sentences for every task
All four writing tasks are judged on grammar and lexis, and at Level 1 most lost marks come from a small number of repeated errors. Learn to join two ideas with the right connector, and punctuate the result correctly.
| Job | Inside one sentence | Starting a new sentence |
|---|---|---|
| Add | and · as well as | Also, · In addition, |
| Contrast | but · although · while | However, · On the other hand, |
| Reason | because · since | This is because… |
| Result | so · which means that | As a result, · That is why… |
| Example | such as | For example, · For instance, |
Rule
Four sentence faults appear in most Level 1 scripts.
Fragment: Because I was nervous. → I forgot my points because I was nervous.
Comma splice: The library was closed, I studied at home. → The library was closed, so I studied at home.
Double connector: Although it was difficult, but I finished. → Although it was difficult, I finished.
Tense jumps: Last year I go to Canada and I visit my cousin. → Last year I went to Canada and visited my cousin. Past stories stay in the past.
Indian English that international readers notice
These phrases are normal in India, but they are not standard international English, and a DET rater or an admissions officer may see them as errors or find them unclear.
| Indian English | International English |
|---|---|
| I am studying here since two years. | I have been studying here for two years. |
| I was very tensed. | I was very worried / stressed / nervous. |
| My father is out of station. | My father is away / travelling. |
| We discussed about the project. | We discussed the project. |
| She is having two brothers. | She has two brothers. |
| my cousin brother · my native place | my cousin · my home town |
| He told that the test was easy. | He said that the test was easy. · He told me that… |
| I passed out from college in 2025. | I graduated from college in 2025. |
Exercise 16 Choose the connector
Choose the word or phrase that best completes each sentence.
1 I was nervous ______ it was my first presentation.
- because
- so
- however
- although
2 The library was closed, ______ I studied at home.
- because
- although
- so
- for example
3 ______ the test was difficult, I finished on time.
- Because
- Although
- However
- So
4 I enjoy cooking. ______, I make dinner for my family every Sunday.
- However
- Although
- For example
- Because
5 Online classes are flexible. ______, they can feel lonely.
- On the other hand
- For instance
- As a result
- In addition
6 My laptop stopped working. ______, I had to borrow my brother’s.
- For example
- Although
- In addition
- As a result
Exercise 17 Correct the sentences
Each sentence has one error from this lesson or from Lesson 1. Rewrite it correctly.
- I am learning English since two years.
- He told that the exam was easy.
- There are many people are waiting at the bus stop.
- I was very tensed before my interview.
- She is having two brothers and one sister.
- My cousin brother lives in Canada.
- Yesterday I go to the market and bought some vegetables.
- The photo shows a kitchen, two people are cooking there.
Lesson 8 · Habits that cost marks, and your Level 1 plan
These habits appear again and again in DET writing from Indian candidates. Most come from school writing formats, from Indian English, from typing on a phone, or from rushing. None of them is caught for you by the test.
| Habit | Why it costs marks | Do this instead |
|---|---|---|
| Naming objects in the photo task: Man. Fruit. Bag. | No sentences, actions or detail to judge | Big picture, action with is + -ing, then details. |
| In this picture I can see… in every sentence | Wastes words and time; reads like a list | Start with the people and the action. |
| Answering two parts of a three-part question | Content is incomplete | Count the parts in the 30 seconds; one paragraph each. |
| Repeating Part 1 in Part 2 | The question asked for a new idea | Answer the new question with a new reason and example. |
| Memorised openings: In today’s modern era…, Every coin has two sides | Words with no content; they rarely fit the question | Start with your answer to this exact question. |
| Letter formulas and text speak in the Writing Sample | Wrong register for a university reader | Full words, capital I, no Respected Sir. |
| Summaries in note form, or with your opinion | Not a summary; facts are often wrong | Situation, problem, outcome, in full sentences. |
| Practising only on a phone, with autocorrect on | On test day, typing is slow and spelling breaks down | Practise on a computer keyboard, spell check off; check the keyboard is set to English and Caps Lock is off before the test. |
| Writing until the last second | Easy errors stay in | Keep the last part of every task for checking. |
Exercise 18 Proofread the Writing Sample
A student answered the question Describe a teacher who helped you. Her answer has eight errors: tense, grammar, punctuation, capital letters and Indian English. Find and correct them.
When I was in 10th standard, my maths teacher, Mrs. Shah, helped me a lot. I was weak in maths and I was getting less marks. She told me to come to school early every morning, she explained every chapter again. She is very patient and she never get angry. She never discussed about my mistakes in front of the class. Because of her, I got 92 per cent in my board exam. I learnt that a good teacher can change a student life. i will always remember her.
Timed practice
Do the next three exercises on a computer with a timer, spell check and grammar check switched off, and no notes. Then use the checklist below and compare with the models in the key.
Exercise 19 Timed Write About the Photo
One minute for each photo, one after the other, with no break, as in the test. Aim for three sentences each.
Exercise 20 Timed Interactive Writing
Read Part 1 only. Allow 30 seconds to plan and 5 minutes to write. Then read Part 2 and allow 3 minutes. Do not read Part 2 before your 5 minutes are up.
Interactive Writing · Part 1 · 5 minutes
Describe a hobby or activity you enjoy in your free time. How did you start it, and why do you enjoy it?
Interactive Writing · Part 2 · 3 minutes
Some people say that young people today spend too much of their free time on screens. Do you agree? Why or why not?
Exercise 21 Timed Writing Sample
Allow 30 seconds to plan, 4 minutes to write and 1 minute to check. Aim for 90–120 words. Write it as if an admissions officer will read it.
Writing Sample · 5 minutes
Describe an important decision you have made. What did you decide, and why?
Before you finish: the Level 1 checklist
- Write About the Photo: big picture first; an is or are before every -ing verb; details and position; no “In this picture I can see”.
- Interactive Writing: every part of the question answered, one short paragraph each, with a real detail; Part 2 on a new idea, with a reason and an example.
- Writing Sample: the right plan for experience or opinion; full words, capital I, no letter formulas; checked in the last minute.
- Summary: situation, problem, outcome; past tense for what was said; names, days and numbers checked.
- Everywhere: no fragments, no comma splices, no although… but; a or the before singular nouns; international English, not Indian English; one spelling convention.
Your Level 1 plan
| Week | Focus | Practice |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Complete sentences and Write About the Photo | Ten minutes of typing practice a day on a computer. Describe five photos a day from news sites or your own phone, one minute each, using the FLC plan. |
| 2 | Interactive Writing, both parts | One Part 1 and Part 2 pair a day (5 plus 3 minutes). Before writing, count the parts of the question aloud. |
| 3 | Writing Sample and summaries | Prepare three real stories you can adapt. Write one Writing Sample a day. Summarise one short conversation or podcast clip a day in 75 seconds. |
| 4 | Accuracy and timed practice | Keep a personal error list from Lesson 7 and check every answer against it. Two full timed sets of all four tasks, spell check off, then compare with the models in this unit. |
When your photo descriptions are three correct, detailed sentences every time, your Interactive Writing answers every part of the question, and your Writing Sample would read well to an admissions officer, move on to Level 2 and the DET 100–115 target: fuller development, more varied sentences and more precise vocabulary.
